Wednesday 17 June 2015

More great writing by our students.

Here are a few more Fairy Tales retold in writing by some students.

Three Billy Goats   By Riley
One day there were three billy goats who wanted the grass on the other side of the bridge, but the bridge was guarded by an evil troll.
So the little billy goat went across the bridge and “Pop” the troll came up from under the bridge. The troll said “Get off my bridge”, and the little billy goat said “Don’t eat me, I’m just little, wait for my bigger brother.” So the troll said “You can go” and the goat went tottering happily to the grass.
Later on, middle billy goat came along and the troll popped up from under the bridge. He said “Get off my bridge” and the middle sized goat said “Don’t eat me, I’m just middle sized, wait for big billy goat”. The troll said “OK, you can go”, so middle sized billy goat went trotter, trotter all the way to the grass.
Suddenly, Big billy goat came along and went on the bridge. The troll came up and had an argument, then big billy goat huffed and puffed and went BIFF and pushed the troll into the water, so they all lived happily ever after.

Jack and the beanstalk.   By Justin
One day jack and his mum were poor. They decided to sell the cow. His mum told him to take the cow. He saw a man and sold the cow and went home with the magic beans. He showed his mum and she threw the beans out the window and sent him to bed.
In the morning he saw a giant beanstalk. He climbed up and found a castle. He crept under the door. Suddenly a giant said “Fee fi fo fum I smell the blood of an Englishman.” Jack hid in a mug. The giant couldn’t find him. He climbed down the beanstalk. The giant went down too. He cut it down and the goose lay a golden egg. They lived happily ever after.

         Jack and beanstalk… By Emma Jane
One day there was Jack’s mum and Jack and they were poor. He got some magic beans. Jack had to climb up the beanstalk. In the morning Jack had a surprise out of his window.He went into the giant’s castle and he heard the sound of the giant’s voice. He heard a goose quack behind him. Finally the giant started to climb down the beanstalk. Jack had to climb up the beanstalk again and grab the goose. Jack chopped the beanstalk down and the goose laid a golden egg so jack and his mum were rich.
The end


1 comment:

  1. it is cool ... from milly in room 13

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